Great to see this short previs to bring your visual ideas partially into being. I am sure your backgrounds will be much more visually evolved, layered and complex as these are quite basic atm. Beware that the words are a bit literal and didactic. Is there more you could do to allude to ideas in a more subtle way that lets the viewer use their imagination and engage with the work on a more imaginative level.
Great to see this short previs to bring your visual ideas partially into being. I am sure your backgrounds will be much more visually evolved, layered and complex as these are quite basic atm. Beware that the words are a bit literal and didactic. Is there more you could do to allude to ideas in a more subtle way that lets the viewer use their imagination and engage with the work on a more imaginative level.
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